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Leafy

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Wintry Matrimony.

Snowflakes touching my chin,
I feel the chill crawl through my skin,
Trees stood naked and regal,
Spreading their branches like an eagle.

I held his hand within my own,
We walked towards the snowy throne,
The love we shared didn't seem to melt the ice,
I was in my perfect paradise.

As the birds sang their happy tune,
With frost; the floor was strewn,
The crunch rippled through the breeze,
I spun in surprise to see he was on one knee.

"You are my light; my only one
Say yes and the deed is done."
I reached for his lips; cold but exquisite,
I am definitely coming back for another visit.

Amongst the winter sun; love shone through
The trees and the pine, all I could think of was you,
Mother Nature was watching my glow,
A flower bloomed as she said hello.

From that day on: I visited every year,
Admiring the beauty; simply austere,
The harmony within me has never been so balanced,
From that day on: my life was romanced.




(I'd like to know what people think so feel free!)

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Then must thou needs find out new heaven, new earth.


Sun Apr 06, 2008 1:23 pm
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Unexpected, instantly accessible and poised...

Very good charlotte

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Sun Apr 06, 2008 1:24 pm
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Leafy

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:) taaaaa

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There's beggary in the love that can be reckon'd.

I'll set a bourn how far to be beloved.

Then must thou needs find out new heaven, new earth.


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Sun Apr 06, 2008 1:25 pm
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Branchy

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I love your poems charlotte.
when you cam to mine and showed me them all i was like wow :]
you have talent m'dear :]

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Sun Apr 06, 2008 5:23 pm
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Tree

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thats a gd read :-)

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Mon Apr 21, 2008 5:14 pm
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s'bit like a death cab song

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Wed Apr 23, 2008 11:07 am
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Tree

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A Poem

You speak with such life
You speak with such grace

Your hands move through the air
In waves of colours, in waves of shapes

The words you speak
You make your own

The stories you tell
They stand out alone

You bask in the shinning light
The glow reflects your skin

Your smile eclipses everything
You are everything



Moving Darkness

All I can see is darkness
A moving darkness
A lonely being
Shaped by cold winds and grey clouds
A game of hide and seek with nature itself
It’s both a happy creature
Who welcomes children to play
In its everlasting playground of fun
And a sad creature
With haunting presence and atmosphere
Covering the streets with uncertainty and confusion
Among its travellers
Its body has nothing but eyes
Single white eyes
That hang in the black sea above the towns
It is an uneasy truce between the glass and me
Between what’s on the outside
And what’s on the inside
I don’t know where I go from here
As I travel on, in this moving darkness

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Wed May 26, 2010 8:52 pm
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So here in this waiting place
Where all things are considered safe
My thoughts stutter in certain pace
Until I realise I’ve arrived too late
My trains just left the station…
Well that’s just great

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